FRENCH EXPERTS , help ?!?

I don't know what "le Sardines" is but maybe if it is plural it should be "les Sardines" and then change c'est to ce sont in the second line. Also, don't start with Aussi in a sentence because it sounds like you are saying "therefore," because it has that meaning, instead use like "de plus,". When you talk about your friend just put "elle est" and not "elle c'est". also, use feminine adjectives when describing her. So, gentille, amusante, and genereuse. say "mes amis" instead of mon. pretty good overall :)